tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post4752890058269396874..comments2024-03-12T05:08:14.436-04:00Comments on Read. wRite. Ramble.: Just Kiss Already BlogfestAJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05856184020625392516noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-1763873338953709562011-02-15T11:05:31.123-05:002011-02-15T11:05:31.123-05:00Thanks everyone for taking the time to read and co...Thanks everyone for taking the time to read and comment. This has been so much fun. <br /><br />And my Jersey Shore is also the Southern portion. No Situations, fist pumps, or beat the beats here! LOL.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06732854288433860194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-56691186210759468412011-02-15T02:46:05.280-05:002011-02-15T02:46:05.280-05:00The traced pink cheeks...a great way to show heat ...The traced pink cheeks...a great way to show heat and blushing. Nice turn of phrase there! Great kiss.<br /><b><a href="http://nitewriter6.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Edge of Your Seat Romance</a></b>Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-33063590760996247622011-02-14T20:34:26.218-05:002011-02-14T20:34:26.218-05:00Oh there's so much longing and regret here. it...Oh there's so much longing and regret here. it's seductively bittersweet.Loralie Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07134452749240292803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-70939885604493276402011-02-14T20:31:53.382-05:002011-02-14T20:31:53.382-05:00Nice excerpt! Love, love, love that last sentence....Nice excerpt! Love, love, love that last sentence.alexiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07122487552931794871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-21379596982928356202011-02-14T18:14:45.449-05:002011-02-14T18:14:45.449-05:00Wow, that is NOT the way you're supposed to ki...Wow, that is NOT the way you're supposed to kiss the bride (unless you're the groom, that is). Very sensual and beautiful. It makes me wonder what broke them up. "Old and gray" ... a lot conveyed in those words ...Dianne K. Salernihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16459839567235304842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-39959722190032124532011-02-14T18:00:35.495-05:002011-02-14T18:00:35.495-05:00Bitter sweet. I love it. I'm your newest follo...Bitter sweet. I love it. I'm your newest follower.<br /><a rel="nofollow">bethfred.com</a>Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09962862566388212238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-74507668002666907622011-02-14T17:59:07.290-05:002011-02-14T17:59:07.290-05:00OH! I love and hate this kiss!! Bitter sweet, mayb...OH! I love and hate this kiss!! Bitter sweet, maybe. You wrote it so well, I it's my own emotions that make it that way! SO Hurray for you and your writing skills!Colene Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086195075690893194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-7486030862222076572011-02-14T17:23:06.142-05:002011-02-14T17:23:06.142-05:00Oh dear. Not over him, at all. And what a kiss.
...Oh dear. Not over him, at all. And what a kiss. <br /><br />Poor Grace... or maybe not ; PAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13598305732221789463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-39109800635239054522011-02-14T16:39:27.663-05:002011-02-14T16:39:27.663-05:00Good post. The story was nicely told. I just stumb...Good post. The story was nicely told. I just stumbled across this, wasn't sure if I'm wrong here though: familiar slow dance. It made me stop and wonder, just because of the rhythm. Just to let you know.<br /><a href="http://nahnomclein.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"><i> Nahno ∗ McLein</i> ™</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16548562702122142828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-71413422714480873612011-02-14T16:01:24.767-05:002011-02-14T16:01:24.767-05:00This is sad and heartwarming and full of so many t...This is sad and heartwarming and full of so many things. Great job!Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-71176802893954662912011-02-14T14:35:50.353-05:002011-02-14T14:35:50.353-05:00A tasty and delicious kiss, but so sad too.A tasty and delicious kiss, but so sad too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-48421564694916582832011-02-14T14:01:14.500-05:002011-02-14T14:01:14.500-05:00Thanks all for the great comments and feedback. Ya...Thanks all for the great comments and feedback. Ya'll made me blush.<br /><br />Yes, poor Miguel but Grace is so not over him. It's all a front. <br /><br />Miguel is recalling this after Grace has come home a widow and pregnant. <br /><br />They more time they spend together, as friends, licking their wounds- Mig's wife left him and their son, they more they can't ignore all the love still between them.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06732854288433860194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-24198816807558133122011-02-14T13:40:34.801-05:002011-02-14T13:40:34.801-05:00WOW that last line is KILLER! This was great!WOW that last line is KILLER! This was great!Christina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-71843215546646959412011-02-14T13:38:13.699-05:002011-02-14T13:38:13.699-05:00Yeah, right. Sounds like she's over him.
Sad....Yeah, right. Sounds like she's over him.<br /><br />Sad.Donna K. Weaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17158114738303231773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-38076750520985071272011-02-14T12:14:41.741-05:002011-02-14T12:14:41.741-05:00this was really great and spoke volumes! Thanks s...this was really great and spoke volumes! Thanks so much for sharing!Creepy Query Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18115161057496086972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-31189287293053621942011-02-14T11:01:10.852-05:002011-02-14T11:01:10.852-05:00Poor Miguel! Awh bless! :O)Poor Miguel! Awh bless! :O)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-61730376727358465442011-02-14T09:54:20.410-05:002011-02-14T09:54:20.410-05:00Wow. Swoon. The Jersey shore, that's where I g...Wow. Swoon. The Jersey shore, that's where I go in the summer, well south Jersey. Love the details the taste of buttercream and wine--great!<br />Nice job!Christine Danekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00979611961825725350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-88319153248702091562011-02-14T09:07:00.030-05:002011-02-14T09:07:00.030-05:00Great scene. I just love that last line. The taste...Great scene. I just love that last line. The taste of what could have been...wonderful!Jennifer Hoffinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616744694563644199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-31836874916992553882011-02-14T09:02:49.345-05:002011-02-14T09:02:49.345-05:00Great line..."moan rumbled from her mouth to ...Great line..."moan rumbled from her mouth to his."Jenna Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07591399291903261245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-52918679543908594082011-02-14T08:21:01.787-05:002011-02-14T08:21:01.787-05:00Oh, as if the kissing wasn't enough, he totall...Oh, as if the kissing wasn't enough, he totally melted my heart with the "old and gray, Grace. Don't forget that." <br /><br />Swoon!Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726858055689145824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-25113527162867159042011-02-14T08:18:05.181-05:002011-02-14T08:18:05.181-05:00Definitely a yummy kiss! This one almost breaks my...Definitely a yummy kiss! This one almost breaks my heart. Great job!Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-31053779624254871192011-02-14T08:15:49.344-05:002011-02-14T08:15:49.344-05:00There's a whole lot of kissing going on today!...There's a whole lot of kissing going on today! Need outweighed reason. Great line! and yum! Butter cream frosting!Samantha Véranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07446488761214047647noreply@blogger.com