tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post5809471403512994401..comments2024-03-12T05:08:14.436-04:00Comments on Read. wRite. Ramble.: DINNER WITH JAWSAJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05856184020625392516noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-55748701606485894812024-01-18T17:56:24.523-05:002024-01-18T17:56:24.523-05:0064F43
Binance Hesap Açma
Twitter Trend Topic Satın...64F43<br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/binance-hesap-acma-binance/" rel="nofollow">Binance Hesap Açma</a><br /><a href="https://dostca.com/twitter-trend-topic-satin-al/" rel="nofollow">Twitter Trend Topic Satın Al</a><br /><a href="https://dostca.com/telegram-abone-satin-al/" rel="nofollow">Telegram Abone Satın Al</a><br /><a href="https://dostca.com/tumblr-begeni-hilesi/" rel="nofollow">Tumblr Beğeni Hilesi</a><br /><a href="https://twitter.com/referanskodu20" rel="nofollow">Binance Referans Kodu</a><br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/binance-ne-kadar-komisyon-aliyor-binance-komisyon-ne-kadar/" rel="nofollow">Binance Komisyon Ne Kadar</a><br /><a href="https://titandijital.com.tr/aion-coin-hangi-borsada/" rel="nofollow">Aion Coin Hangi Borsada</a><br /><a href="https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.nanytoo.app&hl=tr" rel="nofollow">Görüntülü Sohbet</a><br /><a href="https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.nanytoo.app&hl=tr" rel="nofollow">Görüntülü Sohbet Parasız</a><br />B81D6KylanF4F21noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-71042406379794510702024-01-17T23:34:01.135-05:002024-01-17T23:34:01.135-05:0021C43
Facebook Takipçi Satın Al
Tiktok İzlenme Hil...21C43<br /><a href="https://dostca.com/facebook-takipci-satin-al/" rel="nofollow">Facebook Takipçi Satın Al</a><br /><a href="https://dostca.com/tiktok-izlenme-hilesi/" rel="nofollow">Tiktok İzlenme Hilesi</a><br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/bitcoin-madenciligi-nasil-yapilir/" rel="nofollow">Bitcoin Madenciliği Nasıl Yapılır</a><br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/bitcoin-hesap-acma/" rel="nofollow">Bitcoin Hesap Açma</a><br /><a href="https://dostca.com/periscope-begeni-satin-al/" rel="nofollow">Periscope Beğeni Satın Al</a><br /><a href="https://dostca.com/facebook-grup-uyesi-hilesi/" rel="nofollow">Facebook Grup Üyesi Hilesi</a><br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/coin-cikarma-siteleri/" rel="nofollow">Coin Çıkarma Siteleri</a><br /><a href="https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=com.nanytoo.app&hl=tr" rel="nofollow">Görüntülü Sohbet Parasız</a><br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/coin-nasil-uretilir/" rel="nofollow">Coin Nasıl Üretilir</a><br />E6DE3MichelleAA9D3noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-54354509268926798702024-01-07T14:22:59.061-05:002024-01-07T14:22:59.061-05:0025FB7
Bitcoin Nasıl Kazanılır
Binance Kimin
Perisc...25FB7<br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/bitcoin-nasil-kazanilir/" rel="nofollow">Bitcoin Nasıl Kazanılır</a><br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/binance-kimin/" rel="nofollow">Binance Kimin</a><br /><a href="https://dostca.com/periscope-takipci-satin-al/" rel="nofollow">Periscope Takipçi Satın Al</a><br /><a href="https://titandijital.com.tr/bone-coin-hangi-borsada/" rel="nofollow">Bone Coin Hangi Borsada</a><br /><a href="https://dostca.com/binance-referans-kodu-2/" rel="nofollow">Binance Referans Kodu</a><br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/yeni-cikan-ya-da-cikacak-coin-nasil-alinir/" rel="nofollow">Yeni Çıkacak Coin Nasıl Alınır</a><br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/coin-nasil-oynanir/" rel="nofollow">Coin Nasıl Oynanır</a><br /><a href="https://titandijital.com.tr/anc-coin-hangi-borsada/" rel="nofollow">Anc Coin Hangi Borsada</a><br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/coin-oynama/" rel="nofollow">Coin Oynama</a><br />F01E2JasonDFE49noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-86233763753613663532023-12-22T16:37:02.022-05:002023-12-22T16:37:02.022-05:0017BC8
izmir ucretsiz sohbet
çorum en iyi görüntülü...17BC8<br /><a href="https://dostca.com/izmir-sohbet-odalari-sesli-goruntulu-canli-mobil-sohbet-siteleri/" rel="nofollow">izmir ucretsiz sohbet</a><br /><a href="https://dostca.com/corum-sohbet-odalari-sesli-goruntulu-canli-mobil-sohbet-siteleri/" rel="nofollow">çorum en iyi görüntülü sohbet uygulamaları</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/corumsohbet/" rel="nofollow">çorum canli goruntulu sohbet siteleri</a><br /><a href="https://twitter.com/nanytoosohbet" rel="nofollow">görüntülü sohbet yabancı</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/balikesirsohbet/" rel="nofollow">balıkesir ucretsiz sohbet</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/sivassohbet/" rel="nofollow">sivas random görüntülü sohbet</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/bitlissohbet/" rel="nofollow">bitlis mobil sohbet siteleri</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/sinopsohbet/" rel="nofollow">sinop en iyi ücretsiz görüntülü sohbet siteleri</a><br /><a href="https://dostca.com/adana-sohbet-odalari-sesli-goruntulu-canli-mobil-sohbet-siteleri/" rel="nofollow">adana görüntülü sohbet sitesi</a><br />DFD45Taryn551D8noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-53750329190037481022023-12-20T03:46:42.615-05:002023-12-20T03:46:42.615-05:00EE65B
mardin nanytoo sohbet
giresun canli sohbet
u...EE65B<br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/mardinsohbet/" rel="nofollow">mardin nanytoo sohbet</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/giresunsohbet/" rel="nofollow">giresun canli sohbet</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/urfasohbet/" rel="nofollow">urfa telefonda kızlarla sohbet</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/adiyamansohbet/" rel="nofollow">adıyaman bedava görüntülü sohbet sitesi</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/artvinsohbet/" rel="nofollow">artvin mobil sohbet et</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/sohbetkayseri/" rel="nofollow">kayseri telefonda görüntülü sohbet</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/samsun-sohbet/" rel="nofollow">samsun mobil sohbet bedava</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/tuncelisohbet/" rel="nofollow">tunceli görüntülü sohbet uygulamaları ücretsiz</a><br /><a href="https://sites.google.com/view/karabuksohbet/" rel="nofollow">karabük bedava sohbet odaları</a><br />5DAC4DonovanDF1B8noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-21066917956316472392023-12-05T09:36:44.269-05:002023-12-05T09:36:44.269-05:004B551
referanskodunedir.com.tr4B551<br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/" rel="nofollow">referanskodunedir.com.tr</a><br />B14F6Ariah2C0EAnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-89315385251135790032023-11-29T10:12:57.050-05:002023-11-29T10:12:57.050-05:000EB90
binance komisyon indirimi0EB90<br /><a href="https://referanskodunedir.com.tr/" rel="nofollow">binance komisyon indirimi</a><br />02181Ashtyn9394Dnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-74000700959636809402023-11-10T21:12:52.429-05:002023-11-10T21:12:52.429-05:00BA260
Çanakkale Parça Eşya Taşıma
Kırşehir Şehir İ...BA260<br /><a href="https://bit.ly/canakkale-parca-esya-tasima" rel="nofollow">Çanakkale Parça Eşya Taşıma</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/kirsehir-sehir-ici-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Kırşehir Şehir İçi Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/kilis-lojistik" rel="nofollow">Kilis Lojistik</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/gumushane-sehirler-arasi-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Gümüşhane Şehirler Arası Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/sivas-evden-eve-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Sivas Evden Eve Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/corum-lojistik" rel="nofollow">Çorum Lojistik</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/sincan-boya-ustasi" rel="nofollow">Sincan Boya Ustası</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/agri-sehirler-arasi-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Ağrı Şehirler Arası Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/igdir-parca-esya-tasima" rel="nofollow">Iğdır Parça Eşya Taşıma</a><br />AF7DDSergio74F09noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-52737496814043415232023-11-09T16:53:00.703-05:002023-11-09T16:53:00.703-05:004591F
Isparta Şehirler Arası Nakliyat
Konya Şehirl...4591F<br /><a href="https://bit.ly/isparta-sehirler-arasi-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Isparta Şehirler Arası Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/konya-sehirler-arasi-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Konya Şehirler Arası Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/yenimahalle-fayans-ustasi" rel="nofollow">Yenimahalle Fayans Ustası</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/tekirdag-sehirler-arasi-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Tekirdağ Şehirler Arası Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/hakkari-sehir-ici-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Hakkari Şehir İçi Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/mersin-lojistik" rel="nofollow">Mersin Lojistik</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/nevsehir-sehir-ici-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Nevşehir Şehir İçi Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/etimesgut-fayans-ustasi" rel="nofollow">Etimesgut Fayans Ustası</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/yozgat-sehirler-arasi-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Yozgat Şehirler Arası Nakliyat</a><br />07246Madisyn9C4AAnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-17210534212035864202023-11-08T16:09:23.042-05:002023-11-08T16:09:23.042-05:0093678
Ordu Şehir İçi Nakliyat
Eskişehir Şehir İçi ...93678<br /><a href="https://bit.ly/ordu-sehir-ici-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Ordu Şehir İçi Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/eskisehir-sehir-ici-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Eskişehir Şehir İçi Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/batikent-parke-ustasi" rel="nofollow">Batıkent Parke Ustası</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/kirklareli-sehir-ici-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Kırklareli Şehir İçi Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/sirnak-sehir-ici-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Şırnak Şehir İçi Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/denizli-parca-esya-tasima" rel="nofollow">Denizli Parça Eşya Taşıma</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/duzce-evden-eve-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Düzce Evden Eve Nakliyat</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/cerkezkoy-yol-yardim" rel="nofollow">Çerkezköy Yol Yardım</a><br /><a href="https://bit.ly/aksaray-evden-eve-nakliyat" rel="nofollow">Aksaray Evden Eve Nakliyat</a><br />76BEFSidDFBB6noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-24414331421233539802023-10-21T15:21:28.569-04:002023-10-21T15:21:28.569-04:00Tokat Lojistik
Konya Lojistik
Mersin Lojistik
Kara...<a href="https://titandijital.com.tr/tokat-lojistik/" rel="nofollow">Tokat Lojistik</a><br /><a href="https://titandijital.com.tr/konya-lojistik/" rel="nofollow">Konya Lojistik</a><br /><a href="https://titandijital.com.tr/mersin-lojistik/" rel="nofollow">Mersin Lojistik</a><br /><a href="https://titandijital.com.tr/karabuk-lojistik/" rel="nofollow">Karabük Lojistik</a><br /><a href="https://titandijital.com.tr/samsun-lojistik/" rel="nofollow">Samsun Lojistik</a><br />3LUONebulaGoddessXYOLGnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-76136249400022332272023-10-08T12:22:37.100-04:002023-10-08T12:22:37.100-04:00görüntülüshow
ücretli show
B4G8<a href="https://xn--grntl-jua7bcb.show/" rel="nofollow">görüntülüshow</a><br /><a href="https://xn--cretli-2ya.show/" rel="nofollow">ücretli show</a><br />B4G8EchoMatrixGlider101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-57121388939152381252023-10-08T11:52:48.460-04:002023-10-08T11:52:48.460-04:00görüntülü
ucretli show
3UXZ<a href="https://xn--grntl-jua7bcb.show/" rel="nofollow">görüntülü</a><br /><a href="https://xn--cretli-2ya.show/" rel="nofollow">ucretli show</a><br />3UXZBaha55noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-33325405794534605602023-10-07T03:58:51.030-04:002023-10-07T03:58:51.030-04:00kars
sinop
sakarya
ankara
çorum
CGV<a href="https://bayanlarsitesi.com/kars-escort/" rel="nofollow">kars</a><br /><a href="https://bayanlarsitesi.com/sinop-escort/" rel="nofollow">sinop</a><br /><a href="https://bayanlarsitesi.com/sakarya-escort/" rel="nofollow">sakarya</a><br /><a href="https://bayanlarsitesi.com/ankara-escort/" rel="nofollow">ankara</a><br /><a href="https://bayanlarsitesi.com/corum-escort/" rel="nofollow">çorum</a><br />CGVDigitalPhantom007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-31346819009733255132010-07-23T23:45:35.760-04:002010-07-23T23:45:35.760-04:00Thanks for the opportunity to see your work and al...Thanks for the opportunity to see your work and all the critiques. I'll be anxiously checking your blog for more.Elizabeth Janettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09126364534598960883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-90818375281160118242010-07-23T20:19:19.307-04:002010-07-23T20:19:19.307-04:00Sigh, the whole flashback is taken out of the scen...Sigh, the whole flashback is taken out of the scene, this scene becomes the opening to chapter 1. It's on my author site. http://charlimac.com/ Thanks for the read and the input!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06732854288433860194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-61696268735056330932010-07-23T16:52:28.649-04:002010-07-23T16:52:28.649-04:00Man, being brutally honest is hard.
I thought th...Man, being brutally honest is hard. <br /><br />I thought the first paragraph was a little too much telling, not enough showing. The sentences are awkward. I liked the flashback, but I'm not sure that's the right spot for it. I did, however, love the part about the ring. Nice. <br /><br />I think the second to last paragraph would make a better opening.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-57340985746129798192010-07-23T11:53:54.870-04:002010-07-23T11:53:54.870-04:00Thanks for the kind words about the book trailer f...Thanks for the kind words about the book trailer for Letters from David. <br /><br />Your trailer is fantastic. :-)Eve Paludanhttp://evepaludan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-47303072316608942812010-07-23T10:55:32.717-04:002010-07-23T10:55:32.717-04:00Oh Anne, I love making people cry, makes me all ti...Oh Anne, I love making people cry, makes me all tingly inside!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06732854288433860194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-79778296415460419422010-07-22T23:42:11.807-04:002010-07-22T23:42:11.807-04:00Thanks Eve, Letters from David trailer, very movin...Thanks Eve, Letters from David trailer, very moving. Keep us posted too! BGA started out at 136 and is now 121. All from doing this. My CP's kick my arse!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06732854288433860194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-48054323921162479592010-07-22T23:27:06.722-04:002010-07-22T23:27:06.722-04:00Thank you for inviting me, Charli! Best of luck wi...Thank you for inviting me, Charli! Best of luck with this wonderful story.Eve Paludanhttp://evepaludan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-60270808916288825112010-07-22T23:23:13.853-04:002010-07-22T23:23:13.853-04:00Thanks AJ. So glad to be of some inspiration. That...Thanks AJ. So glad to be of some inspiration. That was sort of impulsive and off the cuff, but I try not to hyperanalyze every word in some negative spirit, but to pick out the best words and start moving them up to be the hook. <br /><br />What happens when we start a story is we pour out every idea in a brainstorm, to coin a phrase that encompasses the birth of a story. Then what happens is you take your brainstorm and pick out the best bits and start trying to work that backstory in without making it seem separate from the nowstory. If that makes sense. That's my philosophy and I'm sticking to it. :-) What a great idea for a blog.Eve Paludanhttp://evepaludan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-15909269909292398212010-07-22T23:21:58.394-04:002010-07-22T23:21:58.394-04:00Hey Eve thanks for joining. You are in the right p...Hey Eve thanks for joining. You are in the right pew with your suggestions. <br /><br />Emotion, for me, its simple. K-I-S-S keep it simple stupid, not so much. Awkward sentences are my BFF's. I love them. We all have strengths, weaknesses. Doing things like this only helps us learn more about our craft. <br /><br />Thanks ladies....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06732854288433860194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-78239502589463900652010-07-22T23:08:01.012-04:002010-07-22T23:08:01.012-04:00Eve, that was fantastic! Really, I am so excited f...Eve, that was fantastic! Really, I am so excited for you to read the other version! Thanks so much for stopping by! You loved the exact same things I did!AJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05856184020625392516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3343503076555756967.post-51384635571912270432010-07-22T23:01:09.033-04:002010-07-22T23:01:09.033-04:00p.s. Don't toss out the other stuff. Once you ...p.s. Don't toss out the other stuff. Once you get your hook written, you can start adding things you already wrote after the hook. Because you do have a talent.Eve Paludanhttp://evepaludan.comnoreply@blogger.com