No character names here. It's short and to the point and must leave the reader, agent, or whoever, needing to know more about your story.
Remember, these are ideas for writing conferences and events. We went over the elevator pitch yesterday. These are tools for you to have in your asrenal. When and where to use them is for you to figure out.
The new girl in school is befriended by a hunk. He’s a vampire, who wants to kiss and eat her at the same time.
My PREMISE PITCH for BY GRACE ALONE:
His wife left him and their son. Her husband died and she's pregnant. Can these childhood friends and first loves rekindle more than their friendship?
What do you have for me? I want to see your pitches.