Showing posts with label Crit Partners. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Crit Partners. Show all posts

Sunday, November 21, 2010

What do YOU see?

What do you see?

What do you see in this piece of art to the left? Faces? Letters? Nothing at all? No doubt we all have a different answer. Just as when we read a novel, some see greatness whilst others are bored.

When my lids descend, a world unlike the one I inhabit plays across the planes of my imagination. And when a vision comes upon me, a thought for a scene, setting, or piece of dialogue, I run with it. And what I see is most certainly not going to be what you see.

“I learned... that inspiration does not come like a bolt, nor is it kinetic, energetic striving, but it comes into us slowly and quietly and all the time, though we must regularly and every day give it a little chance to start flowing, prime it with a little solitude and idleness.” Brenda Ueland


As of late, those that circulate in my realm have asked the same question; when will you submit your MS? I thought it was done, they bemoan, asking for the hundredth time; what happens to the secondary characters? You do write a story for them, right? Done is relative term. Yes. And, no.

Yes, of course I'll submit. I have.
But the answer is not always so simple. Unlike following instructions, or going to work to repeat the same repetitive tasks day in and day out, writing, whilst possessing unwritten rules, is a gift of imagination, writing skills, and mastery of the language in which you write.

I've received advice from agents and editors, judges and crit partners, and as a result, have taken their suggestions and made the best possible tale I can. I've been done so many times, I've lost count
. And each time, I repeat the same mantra: this really is IT!

Well, this time, this last beta read, it really is. It HAS to be. Lets face it, some of us could continue writing the same story for years, always attempting to make it better. But this time, it will be submitted to those that requested, then 'tis time to move on.

My partners have done their job; made sure there were no plot holes, grammar mistakes, or inconsistencies. Its my turn, implement in between my other life, and get 'er done!

Writers can be a bit neurotic, obsessive, pedantic, but this really is IT! Charli would kick me arse otherwise.

Its not ready because your family and friends think it ought to be, or a new crit partner does not see what others have seen, but when YOU, the author, creator are confident with the product.

How do you know when your story is ready? Do you obsess endlessly, always hoping to make it better, fearing, it just might not be enough as your reason to hold back, hold back from letting the world see, to read?

What do you see?

AJ

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

The Golden Heart and a Golden Ticket

Remember when Charlie, not me, found that money in the sewer? He went into the candy store and bought one last candy bar. One last attempt at the impossible. The following 'tis truly a writing fairytale.

Last year a critique partner believed so much in her friend's work she convinced her partner to enter the
Romance Writers of America's Golden Heart Contest. This author does not craft cookie cutter romance stories. No, her steampunk-paranormal is edgy, seductive, and wrought with characters that stay with you. Thinking the odds stacked against her, she gave in, took a chance, and entered.

G. Jillian Stone finaled.

And won.

Her crit partner,
A.C. Mason must be one proud mama.

At the RWA National Convention Jill schmoozed at the bar and landed an Agent. Not just any agent but one of the Big Boys. You know the type. The one's that don't take unsolicited manuscripts. You think this is the HEA of this story? Nope.
G. Jillian Stone landed a SIX BOOK DEAL. That's right, six.

This soon to be PUBLISHED author is a member of my critique group. Both AJ and I fell in love with her characters immediately. One of them, Phaeton, is a cross between Johnny Depp's character
From Hell and Robert Downey Jr. in Sherlock Holmes. Total drool factor.

Ms. Stone is now knee deep in edits and will probably laugh at this post, trying to remember when this all happened. (Being locked in an edit cage and all.)
Now, truth be told, Jill was also a veteran on the contest scene. Entering, getting feedback, and constantly working on her craft. Working to make it the best story possible. So, good luck or damned good writing? I say that latter.

Do you know someone whose MS is ready for the leap to enter the Golden Heart? Are you? Click on this
link to read two interviews from GH winners, one G. Jillian Stone herself. Who knows, maybe AJ & Charli will be interviewing you next summer? You never know... The RWA's Golden Heart Contest entry deadline is November 15, 2010. The entry form anyway. The submissions are due December 2, 2010.

This is what happens to kick ass crit partners.
There's still time. Now shoo, go, polish that MS until it shines. I know I will ... and AJ better be thinking the same.

THE YARD MAN: An Affaire with Mr. Kennedy, Pocket, March 2012 - THE CARNAL SINS OF RAPHAEL, Pocket, July 2012 - THE SEDUCTION OF PHAETON BLACK, Kensington, September 2012 - A VERY PRIVATE DUEL WITH PHINEAS GUNN, Pocket, November 2012

AEQUITAS II PUNISHMENT, by a.c. Mason, the second book in the AEQUITAS Trilogy, due January, 17th 2011.

Charli & AJ

Sunday, November 7, 2010

We Don't Need no Stinkin' DeLorean!

Great Scotts! No, you read it right. Great Scotts as in Scotty too Hotties. Not the Professor. My crit partner's MS is filled with hot Highlanders. But this ain't no heaving bosom story. Not at all! And to go Medieval Scotland you don't need Marty McFly.

I am shamelessly plugging my crit partner this evening. She gets major props from me. Kudos, pats on the back, fist taps, or whatever it is you do for your peeps, I'm giving that to my crit partner, aspiring Historical Fiction Author, AJ Wilson.
She got the FULL request at the NJRW Conference. Super proud of her.

When we first exchanged crits over a year ago I thought it would be one of those, you did one for me so I'll do one for you, then done. She was writing Historical Romance and me, Contemporary.

I had never read a historical romance before. Girl was so good, I was hooked. I even cyber chat in Scottish brogue now-as some of you may know.

Over the past year both of our writing has evolved by leaps and bounds. Now, she is doing something so daring. Girls got some big balls. But, she won't wipeout!
She took her historical romance and turned into a work of HISTORICAL FICTION. AJ had the courage to follow her instinct and write the BEST MS possible. What she has done is pure brilliance. Breathtakingly beautiful. And it was already that to begin with.

I am helping the best I can to get it in tip-top for the FULL. Hence, the quiet blog of late. Sorra lads and lassies we've been neglecting our cyber duties. AJ started a funny post about our conference weekend. But, I have her locked away in Scotland, circa 1455 to be exact. Not letting her out.

Her novel, transports you. You'll think you're there. No DeLorean needed. It's that good. And I can't wait to see it on the shelves! Want a taste, check out her site.